The Brotherhood of Makuta - What About a Community MOC Project?

Toa_Vladin · November 19, 2018, 7:11pm

Then why purple?

Toa_Radrix · November 19, 2018, 7:20pm

and a little bit of purple…

Toa_Vladin · November 19, 2018, 7:21pm

I would take off that purple.

Toa_Radrix · November 19, 2018, 7:23pm

Okay.

Gilahu · November 19, 2018, 7:38pm

@Toa_Radrix

Looking good so far. Construction of the lower legs is a little weird, but I’m mostly judging appearance, so…
Torso needs some bulk to make the Hordika leg not stick out so much towards the front, I’d say.
Mask is tricky in blue… Avsa probably would work, but I’d rather not have yet another MOC using that part as a mask. Custom head of course is always an option. If those CCBS shells on the upper legs are in mata blue, then a mata blue mask would work nicely, I think. I’d suggest a Kakama, but that’s probably not something you have available.

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All Makuta are currently assigned

Toa_Radrix · November 20, 2018, 8:54am

Not any Kakama avaible, but I think i could use the Mistika Kaukau, I ordered a Gali Mistika and it will arrive this Friday,do you think that could be good? I’ll see if I can make a custom head

So here’s what I’ve got for now

Monopoly · November 20, 2018, 1:35pm

The arms leave a lot to be improved. The shoulders just look really odd and the light grey lower arms detract from the rest of the look.

As for the legs, swap round the armour plates so the thighs are dark blue and the shins are Mata Blue.

I’d also say remove the wings, unless you have a massive quantity of any of those pieces, in which case, use those instead.

Gilahu · November 20, 2018, 5:26pm

@Toa_Radrix

I pretty much agree with what Mr.Monopoly siad concerning the MOC. If you want to keep mata blue as a colour on it, also definitely add more.
Gali Mistika mask would probably work. Personally just not a big fan of it.

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All Makuta are currently assigned

Toa_Radrix · November 22, 2018, 2:03pm

I removed the mata blue,I’ll still keep the silver. the feet were modified and I made a weapon up. Do you still think I should remove the wings? I’ll get the mask tomorrow, as I told you.

Toa_Vladin · November 22, 2018, 2:17pm

I would add more light grey in the arms.

Toa_Radrix · November 22, 2018, 2:33pm

Yes! I know the perfect place for it!

Toa_Vladin · November 22, 2018, 2:34pm

Let me guess. The lower arms?

Toa_Radrix · November 22, 2018, 2:35pm

Actually, I could do that too, but no, I was think of the upper arms, I could do them both, but I think that will be too much grey
Ok, here you got it

I also strenghten the upper legs

Toa_Vladin · November 22, 2018, 2:38pm

Yes, it would be too much grey then.

Monopoly · November 22, 2018, 4:31pm

I feel like there’s still one glaring problem: the simplicity. It’s not much more than a standard Inika build with a slightly extended waist and quite odd-looking shoulders.

Toa_Vladin · November 22, 2018, 4:37pm

Yeah. Use that cool design for the lower legs that uses the Breakout gun piece.

Toa_Radrix · November 22, 2018, 4:47pm

Ok, I’ll use the gun pieces and I;ll try to get rid of any simplicity (thanks, I feel that is my nicest design i ever had)

Toa_Vladin · November 22, 2018, 4:49pm

Speaking of which, this is my latest version of my Makuta: Doraxus. I don’t really know what else to change to him, aside of the head. What do you think?

Monopoly · November 22, 2018, 4:54pm

That neck looks super skinny.

Toa_Radrix · November 22, 2018, 4:55pm

is this gorast’s brother?

I think this has some simple arms and legs,I don’t think they look too simple,as for something else, I don’t know either, it is really good