You seem to have made a really interesting torso that I would love to see more of! The 'cloth' part blocks most of my view of it, but I appreciate the work that went into making a hunched Turaga.
I do like the idea of using those track pieces as a robe, and orange and blue work pretty good together. The size of the track pieces does seem to take away from the rest of the build a bit, at least from the front view.
Overall, I quite like it! Very unique build 